Thank you!! The idea was the unraveling of a relationship. I've had the sort of all-encompassing "love" of teenaged crushes and early relationships, but this isn't about anyone real. I can mush all the hurt into one. Ahh, the power of poetry.
And the rhyming worked -- it is so rare for me to rhyme and I do it, typically, to show the boredom in my repetition or when I am pissed beyond all belief.
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Date: 2020-11-17 01:59 am (UTC)And the rhyming worked -- it is so rare for me to rhyme and I do it, typically, to show the boredom in my repetition or when I am pissed beyond all belief.
It's an odd combo. :-/