As I played the "intent" of your poem over a few times in my mind, after I left the comment, I realized, of course, that was what you were after. And it does work! I read it too literally!
We don't lock our doors here. Closest neighbor is a bear or a mountain lion.
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Date: 2015-12-09 10:33 pm (UTC)We don't lock our doors here. Closest neighbor is a bear or a mountain lion.