"And so it begins" LJ Idol Exhibit A Week 11

[eeyore_grrl]

We bought a house. Which is twelve kinds of crazy. We're hoping to move in about 2 weeks. Oh, we're also getting married in about a month. So that adds another few kinds of stressy-crazy. Both awesome-tastic things, but, dude, there are things I just didn't consider. Really? My bridesmaids all consult me on which shoes they wear? I had no idea. Also...

		Ownership



and so it begins
the packing and the boxes
	the trash and the stress

the moving
	(and the moving
		and the moving)


oh wait, i’m in california now
don’t forget the termites


and so it begins
the termites search for dead trees
but find only houses
	
wood frame houses on concrete slabs
such yummy food for little ‘mites
gnawing at my window frame
	breeding in my walls
	breaking down my house tiny bite by tiny bite

we’ve taken the trees and offer our houses for supper

and so it begins
the carnival is coming to town
with a big tent full of poison 
killing all, killing
		    killing

and today
       today 
      i don’t feel so bad about death

And a video rendition of me reading it can be found at: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=feudQYuHCVk&feature=youtu.be


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This has been and entry for week 11 of LJ Idol Exhibit A. My topic was "And so it begins..." Read the other 10 entries here http://therealljidol.livejournal.com/639904.html. Then voting starts Monday night.

Comments

[serenejournal.livejournal.com]

lovely!

:)

[sleepygrl79.livejournal.com]

I'm so happy for you and your little family!

You continue to make me more of a fan of poetry!

[hnybny.livejournal.com]

Congrats on the house and wedding!

[tsgeisel.livejournal.com]

Woo hoo! Congratulations and congratulations, and great poem.

[tatdatcm.livejournal.com]

Congratulations and good luck!

[halfshellvenus.livejournal.com]

Congrats on the house! But the termites and the tent... SO not fun. I live in fear of those finding our way to our house (we're in Northern California, and yes-- they do seem to be more prevalent here).

[impoetry.livejournal.com]

Congratulations on the house, sorry bout the termites. This is wonderful, and again, I really appreciate the accompanying video. :)

[lrig-rorrim.livejournal.com]

Moving is hard. And termites are no fun - I enjoyed this, and hope things settle down for you soon.

[theun4givables.livejournal.com]

Moving is such a hectic thing. Good luck. :)

[n3m3sis43.livejournal.com]

Homebuying was one of the most stressful experiences I've ever gone through. Twice. Good luck!

[myrna-bird.livejournal.com]

Very nice, concise.

[applespicy.livejournal.com]

Congrats on your upcoming awesomeness!

And, of course, I dig the poem, too :)

[ocean-song.livejournal.com]

Congrats on the house and the upcoming nuptials and all things nesting. Boo on the poison, but at least there is lots of good air up there to clear things out. I'm so happy for you. *hugs*

[whipchick.livejournal.com]

The last line is really sharp.

[alycewilson.livejournal.com]

Yay, poetry! I do want my own house, but I'm not looking forward to being the one responsible for all the repairs. Good luck with your new life.